Dear Joy
This letter is bring to your notice about the issues in the flat which I am residing.
Since, past one week there has been a frequent leakage in the drainage system and the sink is choked. As all possibilities and call to the care taker there seems no hope it will get fixed soon. The rent has been payed on time without any delay regardless of maintenance issues.
Additionally, the sealing is having a leakage and broken pipe. I have moved to a flat of a friend for few days and been contacting you since 2 days. Incase, you are not able to address this issue and get it fixed, I will be forced to file a complain with the police.
My parents will be visiting in coming days, so the easiest way out would be, to hire a plumber and handyman prior to your visit and analysing the situation without any further delay to this situation.
Thanks
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 240, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... get it fixed, I will be forced to file a complain with the police. My parents will be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4347826087 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34280906006 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67701863354 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.882306015 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.25 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 4.34317383033 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121206385876 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407801020167 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571280172212 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820197442494 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630729888487 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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