Several languages are dying out every year. Some people do not think it is important and say that our life will say that our life will be simpler with fewer language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many languages disappear every year. Some people believe that if there are fewer languages, we make our life easier. Form my perspective, in a long run, it exerts an adverse impact on countries’ development.
There is not deniable that without language diversity, we can communicate with those who from different countries, which is not only beneficial to our studies but also working efficiency. For instance, we learn a wide range of historic issues through daily interaction with diverse kin’s of religions as well as companies recruit more workers to expand their scales. However, in a long run, these advantages seem oversimply the influence in this case.
With more languages dying out, countries will lose their cultural contents which can be distinguished. It means fewer skilled employees can embark on projects at advantage of their specialist knowledge about minor languages, such as French, Hungarian, which result in larger unemployment rate, because it loses culture diversity. What is more, it is less curious and enthusiastic for people to explore meaning things behind countries, such as showing no interest in how to applied languages. Therefore, everything seems monopoly and we are no longer knowledgeable in contrast to our ancestors.
To sum up, simper languages may bring us convenience in communication, but in a long run, we are unable to make sense of other countries’ different cultural heritage, language.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s; development. There is not deniable that without language diversity, we can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in contrast, such as, as well as, in contrast to, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1233.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11058408234 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697777777778 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.6895270693 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.090909091 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4545454545 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164681703486 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684684234065 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703852198595 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969634307167 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575377320082 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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