On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortnunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- explain how you lost it
- tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with regard to a very valuable item that I have lost during my previous vacation in Spain. Fortunately, I have issued a travel insurance just before going into my trip in case of such problem. my insurance card reference is AS12345, and my name is Bilal Abo. Yesterday, when I got back from the airport I checked my professional camera, which's black and white Canon model, in the luggage and unfortunately i did not find it.
Then immediately I contacted the hotel to ask if by accidentally I forgot it there. they assured me that my room was empty when I left the hotel. Thereafter, I called the taxi agency that dropped me at the airport last night, but they also confirmed to me that nothing missed by me. Therefore, I can certainly assert that my professional camera has been stolen at the airport when I was waiting my flight there.
As per the travel insurance policy, I would like to request that you compensate me the cost of my camera which is almost $1000. I still have the original invoice if you would like to see it. I will send you my bank account details in a separate email.
I look forward to receiving your great response.
Best regards,
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to ...
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...g into my trip in case of such problem. my insurance card reference is AS12345, an...
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...model, in the luggage and unfortunately i did not find it. Then immediatel...
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...ge and unfortunately i did not find it. Then immediately I contacted the hotel t...
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...k if by accidentally I forgot it there. they assured me that my room was empty when ...
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...ort when I was waiting my flight there. As per the travel insurance policy, I wo...
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...nk account details in a separate email. I look forward to receiving your great r...
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...count details in a separate email. I look forward to receiving your great re...
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...rward to receiving your great response. Best regards, Bilal
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... your great response. Best regards, Bilal
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...at response. Best regards, Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58256880734 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62178737563 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637614678899 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1593813675 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8461538462 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162891515461 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540575978157 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602787667227 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939911552897 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721174982358 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.