The line graph below shows the average daily maximum temperatures for Auckland and Christchurch, two cities in New Zealand, and London and Edinburgh, two cities in the United Kingdom.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The line graph compares the two major cities of New Zealand and London in terms of their daily maximum temperatures. The data is measured in Celsius and runs from January to December.
Overall, the two cities of New Zealand experience a decrement in the average temperature between July and August with Christchurch having the lowest rate. However, the opposite is seen in the two cities of UK with London receiving the maximum temperature on the same period.
London and Edinburgh start the year with just over 5 degrees Celsius. This is about 10 times lower than that of Auckland and Christchurch at about 25 for Auckland and 23 for Christchurch. However, the rate dramatically drops until the end July and between the said month and August, the temperature for both Christchurch and Auckland is already at the low of 15 and just above 10, respectively. Inversely, Edinburgh makes an increase of about 13 degrees Celsius and London with over 20 making it the highest among all cities on that given period.
The temperature for all cities involved starts to go back to their usual daily rate after August and continues up until December. Auckland still has the highest rate of temperature with about 22 degrees Celsius followed by Christchurch with just over 20. The people in London and Edinburgh experience about the same amount of temperature in December as what they are able to have in January.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95780590717 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71390358327 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510548523207 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9285662904 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.818181818 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 5.23603664747 24% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323969897273 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133281337317 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100774872418 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226601379945 0.15604864568 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695790765888 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.