Some people think that it is a good idea to give children a small amount of money each week to spend on what they would like. Other people think that this is wrong and that it is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Nowadays without money, a human being can not live. Money has all the needs fulfilled to people like buying to selling and more also but in this essay, some believe that a small amount of money to give pupils it is a good way while others say it is kind of waste stuff. I give my opinion before discussing the debate I believed that paternal should give some portion of money their adolescent.
To being with, mother and father and other family members have the mentality to give money to his child and child could become happy to keep money and save all amounts of money in their small personal bank fulfilled his needs like chocolates and toys whenever he wants. Moreover, many parents should think about their pupils something learns financial planning in the future they have when will grow how to tackle financial management. For example, the warren buffet is a fit example to understand because when he was a child and doing the job they small amount of money-saving instead of spending and this man understand term of investment what should do having money.
On the other side give money to his child that is a sound way but parents also take some responsibility for his juveniles, However, they are not gone at the catastrophic stage because of some younger believe that they could enjoy and the wrong direction went through it. one example takes drug and drinks which is harmful to health and also younger people. The family member must know about his child after gave money where the child had to spend money.
To sum up, my points for giving money is boon and bane but paternal also responsible for all the situations ready to uncertainities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs fulfilled" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'fulfilling' or 'to be fulfilled'.
Suggestion: fulfilling; to be fulfilled
...g can not live. Money has all the needs fulfilled to people like buying to selling and mo...
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Line 2, column 4, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'begin'?
Suggestion: begin
... portion of money their adolescent. To being with, mother and father and other famil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, while, for example, kind of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6941580756 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36671234719 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560137457045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.9472481149 49.4020404114 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.6 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345673717081 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134697516153 0.084324248473 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920520304181 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20790695175 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104302732605 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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