98. The following is a recommendation from the business manager of Monarch Books.
"Since its opening in Collegeville twenty years ago, Monarch Books has developed a large customer base due to its reader-friendly atmosphere and wide selection of books on all subjects. Last month, Book and Bean, a combination bookstore and coffee shop, announced its intention to open a Collegeville store. Monarch Books should open its own in-store café in the space currently devoted to children's books. Given recent national census data indicating a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten, sales of children's books are likely to decline. By replacing its children's books section with a café, Monarch Books can increase profits and ward off competition from Book and Bean."
The manager of Monarch Books concludes that her store should refurnish the part that is originally used for sales of children’s books to a new café to make her business more profitable and competitive. To validate her argument, she points out the section for children’s books has been fainted away in customers’ interests. However, the manager still doesn’t provide sufficient evidence to indicate it is crucial and beneficial for her business to do so.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 554 350
No. of Characters: 2665 1500
No. of Different Words: 248 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.852 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.81 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.695 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 175 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 139 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 102 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 62 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 25.182 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.59 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.636 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.31 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.513 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.155 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, then, thus, in addition, such as, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.9520958084 93% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 28.8173652695 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 80.0 55.5748502994 144% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2832.0 2260.96107784 125% => OK
No of words: 551.0 441.139720559 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13974591652 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.56307096286 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07294955416 2.78398813304 110% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 204.123752495 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460980036298 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 889.2 705.55239521 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 15.0 8.76447105788 171% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.70958083832 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.22255489022 261% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.506527873 57.8364921388 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 119.503703932 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0454545455 23.324526521 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86363636364 5.70786347227 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111094650314 0.218282227539 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373643756993 0.0743258471296 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336998490123 0.0701772020484 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691254468217 0.128457276422 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330320618861 0.0628817314937 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 14.3799401198 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 98.500998004 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 12.3882235529 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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