Many people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
In recent days, we can see that in the media or magazines level of technologies day by day increasing in the respective field.
being a technology people life could easy now I discuss this essay what is a boon and bane of developing science technology.
Firstly, having technologies we communicate with our relatives from an international country on video call face to face. Secondly, many countries are built up the relation being with technologies particular I one example pick up the US have strong communication ideology and technology of defense own there country. Moreover, many adults liked to touch with upgraded innovation so they are within less time to could achieve the result. From narrow down, now a world are turning to cashless with the help of technological development it means if in own mobile just tap one button the cash is credited on someone account. Hustle and bustle life of people could find a way how all are they easy to work that intention make perfect of them.
On the other side after advancing technologies, many pros are available at the moment but backside also cons are a stick.
especially of pupils on education purpose had a sound way but many others are missed used with these technologies do more crime on the internet fraud just boost up. For most people lose their memory from ancient time means that time not much-used technologies people did manually work but, now computer program all can do.
To agglomerated my above points many pros and cons are impacted on science innovation I should recommend the world move faster than before but we take some responsibilities to our societies, not the wrong way to use technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91519434629 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81177514865 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636042402827 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.0667425387 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197241833058 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708313624033 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428547656116 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0865642686803 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553034019999 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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