Cycling is more environmentally friendly than others forms of transport. Why it is not popular in any places? And how to increase its popularity?
It cannot be denied that cycling is a healthy and environmentally form of transport. But it is getting less popular among people in this modern life. There are some reasons for this trend and some ways to make people cycle more often.
We can see that, nowadays, fewer people choose bicycle as main means of transportation. In a modern life, fast pace of life makes people become busy with their life, wo they will choose to travel in the faster kind of transport like cars or motors rather than biking to save time. On the other hand, roads are dominated by cars and motor that they are not large enough for people to cycle. For example, Hanoi city is always crowded with a lot of motor vehicles, which stealing the road for cyclist. Weather is also a reason that makes people choose to drive cars and motors and not ride bicycle. When the weather is hot, cold or rainy, not everybody fell like travelling in bad weather, so they choose the car for instead because cars are created for driver needn’t to care about the bad weather. Lastly, far distance from home to work place prevent people from cycling.
To solve this problem, government should build more cycling road so that people can travel by bicycle more safely. In addition, we can build bike station next to the bus stops or subways to make sure that people can use bicycle every where they go. The reason for this plan is that the public transport rarely stop exactly at their office. furthermore, a high tax on private motors should be put that offer people with a cheaper mean of transport like bicycle to travel.
In conclusion, there are some reasons that make cycling less popular. And if we can solve the problem that people have when they travel by bike, more and more people will choose to cycle instead of driving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to bicycle'
Suggestion: to bicycle
...see that, nowadays, fewer people choose bicycle as main means of transportation. In a m...
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Line 2, column 249, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er kind of transport like cars or motors rather than biking to save time. On the ...
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Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... other hand, roads are dominated by cars and motor that they are not large enough...
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Line 3, column 229, Rule ID: EVERY_WHERE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'everywhere'?
Suggestion: everywhere
...o make sure that people can use bicycle every where they go. The reason for this plan is th...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, lastly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22301307 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534375 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6618027042 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127196632981 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054901177711 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582002125882 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111350599652 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654222484052 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.