Modern technology is not very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work.
Do you think there are disadvantages to relying too much on technology
Nowadays people are surrounded by advanced technology and that technology is commonly used in many working locations. This new trend has superiority for people to reduce stress and I think depending on technology more has serious drawbacks to health.
On the one hand, the cutting edge instruments are very useful for completing the works as Fast as possible With zero error. In the past, the large number of people required to finishing the work on time, however, today time machines are used rather than people because it saves time also more work is done in a short period of time. Let us take the bank ATM, for instance, In past 10 years ago It was difficult for people to search the bank for withdrawing the money but now the modern machine is available in the bank, which means people do not need to squander the time for waiting in the huge line. In short, new technology reduce the stress of human for completing work on time without losing energy.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks to the utilization of modern technology more. Firstly, the advanced equipment makes the people inactive in such a way that humans never try to find the solution to a problem by themselves if they are like totally dependent on modern technology. Secondly, relying more on the technological instrument also creates an eye problem. To illustrate, looking in the computer screen at the working place damaging the eye and later in life many people use the lances to see. Hence, there are two disadvantages of using more technological products in the office, It turns the people into inactive and develops eye issue.
In conclusion, Today most of the work is done with help of modern technology and it reduces the stress of workers to finish their work, not only this but it also changes the working environment by decreasing the efforts of human towards the work. There are also disadvantages in the form of eye problem and make people inactive if they use excess modern technology.
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| 2019-08-19 | Ajay Naykar | 100 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 318, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... time also more work is done in a short period of time. Let us take the bank ATM, for instance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84750733138 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63296732228 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524926686217 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2828547105 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.153846154 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2307692308 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243698588718 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966460529168 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635018746062 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171891310641 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582627183758 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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