The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in UK from 2001 to 2008
The chart illustrates the percentage of men, women and children who had five healthy parts of fruit and vegetables each day for period of eight years (2001-2008) in England.
Overall, women have consumed highest parts of fruits and vegetables and children have least amount of healthy food. By far, percentage of women who have consumed highest parts of fruits and vegetables was observed in year 2006 whereas the least was observed in children during the three consecutive years of 2001, 2001 and 2003.
The percent consumption of healthy food by women was around 20% in year 2001 which considerably increased over the years. The decline from the highest peak was observed in both years 2007 and 2008 by around 32% and 29% respectively. In men category, the eating of fruits and vegetables stayed constant around 17% during three years (2001, 2002 and 2003). The significant rise was observed in men category from the year 2004 (around 20%) which continued to rise around 27% (2006). However, the percentage remained constant very next year and dropped to around 24% in 2008. The percentage of children having healthy portions followed similar pattern to men category. The percentage was remained consistent from 2001 to 2003 (around 12%), increased considerably to around 25% during 2007 and then dipped to 23% in year 2008.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'consumed the highest'.
Suggestion: consumed the highest
...-2008 in England. Overall, women have consumed highest parts of fruits and vegetables and chil...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the least'.
Suggestion: have the least
...s of fruits and vegetables and children have least amount of healthy food. By far, percent...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'consumed the highest'.
Suggestion: consumed the highest
...d. By far, percentage of women who have consumed highest parts of fruits and vegetables was obse...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nsecutive years of 2001, 2001 and 2003. The percent consumption of healthy food ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05963302752 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53124985387 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45871559633 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8754790909 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.3 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21789678489 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103374983408 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758738662558 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19157915199 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0815249070925 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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