It is argued by some people that living in hot climates influences their work with no laziness while other believe that cold climate gives them happiness with no water problem. In this argument I believe that cold weathers brings positive vibes around people with good sleep and a good healthy life with less exposure to infections.
On one hand, it is believed that different climates are comfortable for people living in different countries. There are many factors for their love towards weather. One of them is the field which is exposed to these conditions from long period and moreover, crops are suitable to grow with increase in export businesses. For such reason people will not leave their home countries even in extreme conditions. The second main important factor would be going for a vacation to enjoy a different weather and preferring to live on beaches by exposing skin directly to sun which is observed in northern part of Europe. However, in hot weathers which makes humans and animal with loss of water from their bodies and increase in mass death due to water scarcity.
On the other hand, in my opinion i prefer cold weathers because i want to visit places such as Antarctica to know about their way of living and surviving. Consequently, the people over there have learnt to live. Although , middle class people prefer hot weathers because heavy rains leads to bad roads and destroy their house with load full of water. Cold weathers also brings stress free nature in people's life with youngsters staying in blankets in early mornings enjoying the weather. There will also be cooking of hot dishes and drinking hot coffees which improves stamina for work.
In conclusion, I prefer cold weather than hot weather not only in terms of enjoyable condition but also with good health as observed with hot weather leading loss of lives and energy. Thus, lifestyle of cold countries are admired and on vacation by increasing tourism
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...city. On the other hand, in my opinion i prefer cold weathers because i want to ...
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Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... opinion i prefer cold weathers because i want to visit places such as Antarctica...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...over there have learnt to live. Although , middle class people prefer hot weathers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93902439024 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40698011513 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.179733916 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8666666667 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299491991822 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104340962563 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483034922107 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201325585801 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265761208032 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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