Friends and families bring more happiness than money
Both friends and family are extremely important things in life, but they are not all of thing that brings happiness to people. Some people assert that only needing to have family and friends will make more happiness in their daily life than earning much money and possess enormous properties. On the other hand, other people believed that the money has an irreplaceable role and high income is the mainstay of elements for the happy life. From my point of view, the key to open the happy door with the majority of people are money, which help people have a comfortable life.
Firstly, I assert that money makes life much easier because it reduces lots of stress and anxieties. Families who have enough money to spend on accommodation, clothing, food or the entertainments will be less worried than people always exist under suppression of concern for the daily activities. They can give for family the best condition to develop, the children can be educated in a better environment when they are financial enough affording to pay the school fee even the relevant activities. Some people say happiness comes to their lives from the simple thing around them and possession does not sort out any problem, but I believe that it is difficult for parents to elate if they always worry about money. To illustrate, when the facility of parents cannot afford to look after their children, there are more and more the arguments and certainly these circumstances are not situation that anyone expects in their lives. A simpler example of this is with an enormous debt, whether parents will feel happiness. Definitely, the answer is not.
In conclusion, one of the ways to happiness comes from family and perhaps even friends, but essential requirement that they need to attempt achievement is an outstanding financial resource.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 708, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ents to elate if they always worry about money. To illustrate, when the facility ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98355263158 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61494537569 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.0746967511 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.25 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326805100523 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106696398343 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0959833451068 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209550291209 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117258383408 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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