Many people use social media every day to keep in touch with friends and get social news. Do you think the advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages?
There is a fact that social media nowadays is a necessary tool for people to connect with others and acquire news. However, there are many persuasive arguments that social media causes depression and contains a variety of fake news that directly affects people.
On the one hand, social media helps users have a relaxing time by receiving news and chatting with friends. Citizens just need a mobile phone or laptop with internet and create an account to get the latest news without paying any fees. For instance, students at university are usually hectic during break times. They can take their mobile phones to join social media or read the news on Facebook and Instagram. They can also get lots of information about the world.
Nevertheless, people use social media too much because they have psychological problems. They feel difficult to make new friends, which makes them more vulnerable to being exploited by criminals who steal money and information through social media. Some of the content on social media is not suitable for the public, which means the government cannot control it. For example, many students at university move from the countryside to the city and lack interpersonal skills, and are always in sight of crime. Furthermore, toxic friends from social media can lead students in an adverse way and drive them against their parents.
To conclude, although there are some disadvantages to using social media, the benefits of social media are outweighed as it helps people in many aspects of life
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...y and information through social media. Some of the content on social media is not suitable...
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Line 5, column 571, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an adverse way" with adverb for "adverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nds from social media can lead students in an adverse way and drive them against their parents. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08366533865 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54103947958 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613545816733 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7136035624 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.1538461538 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358305661301 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129320474093 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926572768711 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249834000251 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729074269701 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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