Cyclists and car drivers sharing the same road cause some problems. What are the problems? What are the solutions?
At the present time, people have different views about whether they should get jobs with high salaries because they think it is more important than whether they like that job or not. Although there are some advantages to such jobs, I believe that people should take jobs that give them more job satisfaction.
First of all, the cost of living nowadays is very expensive. This requires people to get high-paying jobs so that they can pay for their basic needs, such as insurance, bills, and food. Secondly, some people have the belief that money can bring anything, including happiness. They can purchase whatever they want. For instance, they will take an expensive holiday, have a meal in a five-star restaurant, or get luxury goods such as a villa or limited edition cars, and through that, they will feel happy. These kinds of mindsets can lead to the acknowledgement that higher-paying jobs are better.
However, I also agree that people should get enjoyable jobs. If they get jobs that suit their character and ambitions, they will work hard and develop their creativity. Therefore, they can have the opportunity to improve themselves and increase their salaries. Another reason is that people get jobs with high salaries. For example, they have to spend eight or more hours a day at work, which makes them feel tired when they turn back home. Thus, they will spend less time with their families, friends, and loved ones. Moreover, long hours of work can lead to many mental health problems, including stress and depression. Additionally, some people also use alcohol and tobacco to help them focus more on their work, which leads to cancer and other diseases.
In conclusion, it seems to me that people are more likely to be enjoyable in their jobs than earn a lot of money, so if you do not have satisfaction in your work, then sooner or later you will get tired and bored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85139318885 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46011810306 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7075868267 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1764705882 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47058823529 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0127725925331 0.244688304435 5% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.005817257478 0.084324248473 7% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0126725442103 0.0667982634062 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00869156092395 0.151304729494 6% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00552692414309 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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