Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
It goes without saying that in this progressive world where we live, finding a decent job has a profound effect on our future life, which means that every individual is inclined to be influenced by special carrier either positively or even adversely. These days, there is heated debate among people whether in the past finding secure jobe was easier than nowadays. Personally speaking, I firmly hold the view that it can be observed that by watching the life of the people in the past which they had difficulty to recognize a secure job. To support my point of view, two significant reasons are being explored in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, it is crystal clear that the reason which has made impossible for people in the past to find the secure job lies behind the fact that in the past there was not enough technology which people reach the successful life. In this line of thought, It should be noted that human beings are always striving to improve the quality of life by finding a secure and decent job which lead to a successful future. To put it simply, due to the lack of technology in the past, people could not be able to identify a job would lead to a secure future. In contrast, nowadays, there are a lot of technology and networking websites which provide an opportunity for people to save their time and find a decent job. By way of illustration, one of the most conspicuous websites which are essential and practical for those students who graduate at the university is the Linkedin. However, most of the companies advertise their open position on this website and students can find a suitable career for themselves by searching on it. For example, now I am working with the professor at the University of Monash, Australia as a Ph.D. candidate in which I find this position on the Linkedin. But in the past most people it was not easy to find a proper job since most people could not be able to have a secure future.
What is more, It is no secret to anyone that in the past most of the parent of the small or large family had no connection between people and there was not a better relationship between people in the community, which means it had a negative effect on the communication and lead to failure in finding a decent job for their children. To be more specific, it is believed by many people that in the last decade people have been looking for ways to improve their communication between a large number of employee, businessman and so on. In this regard, through association with diverse people, we can reach not only a sense of love security, acceptance, and companionship but also this relationship can help us to create a link and find a decent job or occupation for ourselves. It is worth bearing in mind that in the past the relationship between the member of the family, society, and so on was not good, so it had a notorious influence on the friendship between each other. Therefore, finding a decent job was not easy for everyone.
In conclusion, given the reasons mentioned, I firmly believe that in the past recognize a proper job was not easy for people which lead them to had a successful future. This is because in the past the technology was not at a high level and the connection between people also was low.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 482, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... to improve their communication between a large number of employee, businessman and so on. In thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 97.0 52.1666666667 186% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2691.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 584.0 407.700716846 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60787671233 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.48103885553 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65088790328 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.426369863014 0.524837075471 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 857.7 618.680645161 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2167938141 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.631578947 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.7368421053 20.6045352989 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94736842105 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168441113384 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681926840789 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0515106186346 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123527262012 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376432544777 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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