People nowadays prefer to try what is in trend whether it is about clothing or hairstyling. By doing this, they take a feeling of satisfaction that they are as cooler as anyone else. This is very common among youngsters as they have heightened feelings and want to look attractive more than ever.
In my opinion, being fashionable and having a modern appearance is as crucial as other important things in life. This cannot be set aside considering unimportant as this is one of the factors which help with a confidence boost. As they say, if you look good, you focus more on other important matters than your appearance.
I don’t know much about other countrymen but people in my country are deeply influenced by western culture. They also want to live an American Dream and though they don’t have much idea about fulfilling it, they follow what they see in Hollywood movies. I am not implying western culture is having any detrimental effects on Indian culture itself but Indians are being influenced it which is causing them to give preference to western over Indian culture.
Every culture has its virtues and should be followed to take their benefits but people should also maintain to respect their own culture which includes traditional clothing and various hairstyling. When the best things from two different cultures are combined, the result is always beautiful.
In essence, people mainly youngsters have a deep sense to look beautiful in every possible way and it cannot be described as a bad thing. Even though people can be influenced by other cultures, they should always feel proud of their values and culture instead of being ashamed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...of satisfaction that they are as cooler as anyone else. This is very common among ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01798561151 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62155203371 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9521378087 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.307692308 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131177137648 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483372148496 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332668529505 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0698784688516 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271017193587 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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