Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
There is no doubt that life is ever-evolving. However, a school of thought holds that now everyone is occupied with many options, which is a far cry from the past. This is attributed to a host of factors and in this essay, I totally agree with this viewpoint.
On the one hand, it is understandable why people daily approach tons of information in many fields to make choices. This may be rooted by an increase in the living standard of the overall population, which entails a rise in people’s demand. As a result, people would be long for owning more properties and hesitate more or less to make a final decision. Those behaviors would be a waste of time while having only an option could fuel their selections in just a moment.
On the other hand, although having excessive choices causes some aforementioned problems to individuals, it still does wonders in many circumstances. Thanks to the proliferation of the Internet, people can easily access a wide range of information regardless of any fields, places or moment. For example, it is convenient to choose to buy clothes via various social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, Amazon because many shops sell apparels online so that shoppers would not have to go shopping with a far distance.
In conclusion, excessive choices that people are inevitably bombarded in this day and age has both pros and cons. However, while this issue could trigger a negative bearing on people’s lives, I am convinced that approaching a great deal of news to make choice is more advantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as a result, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92748091603 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95424038868 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63358778626 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3175452008 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.583333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203912617733 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.067334965712 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456564108931 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114784398637 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271690693746 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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