You recently visited a theatre and had an accident there. The staff were very helpful. Write a letter to the manager giving good feedback.
In your letter, you should tell:
– and describe the accident
– how the staff helped you
– how similar situations could be prevented in the future.
Dear Sir,
My name is Valli, and I am writing to convey my appreciation and feedback about one of your staffs concerning his invaluable help.
To elaborate on the situation, I came for a movie along with my friends on Saturday for a noon-show. Due to rain, the pathway was quite slippery so I lost control and fell, luckily was not injured much. I got embarrassed and barely was not on a situation to walk due to sparse pain.
Immediately, one of your service people arrived and supported me. Besides, he served me with a towel to clean myself and some coffee to make me calm and relax. Then, I conveyed my regards to him and left home. But I still, wish to show my gratitude by providing feedback about such a generous person to you.
However, during rainy seasons since the theatre floor tiles were white and shiny, it won't be much visible if the water spilt over it. So please make sure to keep the floor dry and add some caution boards to avoid such happenings.
I hope you would consider the aforementioned concerns and convey my feedback to appropriate staff.
Regards,
Valli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Valli, and I am writing to co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, still, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67179487179 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56473838271 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.676923076923 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1347207959 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8181818182 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1127625981 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0370700475526 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506004065618 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.072581308152 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544472218838 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.