According to some people, schools do not take in priorities to teach the students about health. I certainly agree with this statement, as a good health is of paramount importance for our life and future.
A nutritious and different lessons about keeping the body in a good working order play a vital role in order to maintain self-independent human and provide a happy life for the students. An increasing amount of different diseases related to not keeping your body and mental health well stems from the childhood and lack of the knowledge, while school is the place where should be taught the conceptions of living, in simple words, lessons must provide a guidance through the life, thus one of the criteria’s to be successful is to be healthy. Although, education system incorporates many branches of study whilst such really warranted lessons are just not taking the importance.
Moreover, lessons about good health can be rather joyful for the students and will keep them motivate to a good life without any alcohol drinks, cigarettes and even drugs. Students by themselves will be able to see and reckon over their lives. In addition, it is beneficial to be more discipline and control your wishes, to be more planned and not eat any food and know your body structure, therefore the government should keep an eye on such education system, which has great social advantages.
Overall, health lessons are the most important either for students and society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04098360656 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76541877183 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.9406793568 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1111111111 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0965763233818 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542622270624 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852354378101 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789523684713 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855401925636 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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