Your friend wrote a letter to you asking for advice on their parents both elderly visiting your area.
In the letter, you must give a suggestion of which area is the best, recommend a place to stay, Invite them to do something with you.
Dear Smith,
I received your letter yesterday morning, I feel so delighted to catch you through the letter after so long time and getting to know that your parents are visiting my place very soon.
In the letter, you seemed to worry about your parents visit Belbari for 1 week as to where they go or stay because they are quite older now and completely unfamiliar with this place. For them, 'Betana Wetland' is perfect to spend some time as this is completely packed with natural beauty along with the variety of species over there.
I 'm extremely sorry for not being able to live them at my house, due to the some of the complications I'm having about my mother's illnesses. In Belbari, many hotels are so good for the guest, and among them ' Mountain View Hotel' is quite comfortable for all ages. Although it is comparatively expensive than rest of the others one, the service provided by this is awesome. I never heard any person complaining about its services.
Here is a famous restaurant which serves all dishes from around the country, I have heard that your parents are food lovers and especially with 'Thakali Khana'? I want to take them there and have some great time ahead if they don't have any problem with it.
I'm waiting for their arrival.
Yours Lovingly,
Ritu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: THE_SOME_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'same'?
Suggestion: same
...le to live them at my house, due to the some of the complications Im having about my...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...le to live them at my house, due to the some of the complications Im having about my mother...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e, due to the some of the complications Im having about my mothers illnesses. In B...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re so good for the guest, and among them Mountain View Hotel is quite comfortable...
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Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... and have some great time ahead if they dont have any problem with it. Im waitin...
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Line 9, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... if they dont have any problem with it. Im waiting for their arrival. Yours Lo...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...they dont have any problem with it. Im waiting for their arrival. Yours Lovi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70353982301 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34322848049 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659292035398 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2443018234 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6363636364 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252840657299 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846094894641 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771130870787 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133217560287 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777251353465 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.