Mass Media has changed the way we communicate. It has both positive and negative effects. Give your opinion and discuss both views.
The importance of Mass Media which was always has now become more controversial with the many people claiming that. It is while beneficial other reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years this essay will further both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reason which will further explain this argument but the most preponderant one stems fact that it creates awareness about current happenings all over the globe. People remain updates with latest news without any delays. Another pivotal aspect of this argument is that additionally it acts as a public voice in democratic society information regarding rights and duties of citizens. Needless to say that all this merits stand in a good stead.
However there are some pitfalls that negative this argument and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but the most alarming is that it may spread fake news or misleading information. besides, interferes in the private lives of celebrities and public figures spread rumors easily. Hence it is apparent why many are against Mass Media
According to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of mass media are instrumental indeed. Nevertheless the potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: with the latest
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Suggestion: However,
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Suggestion: Besides
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Suggestion: Nevertheless,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29515418502 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74076793697 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612334801762 0.580463131201 105% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.735377516 50.4703680194 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.272727273 104.977214359 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.25397266985 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860394906018 0.242375264174 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0262777398597 0.0925447433944 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0395986077032 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0541915592649 0.151781067708 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363560933871 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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