According to some people, technology and the internet era have replaced local libraries, thus they are no in priorities comparing with the past. While there is an increasing number of those who think like that, others are not in accordance with claiming that books are still important and libraries remain the place where students might find a good atmosphere. This essay will consider two views standing for the second statement.
So why is technology replacing public libraries? There are some good reasons such as, due to its ability to find any type of question immediately and with a variety of any other source related to this topic, whilst in libraries, it is needed to spend an hour to find an appropriate book as the same as essential information.
On another hand, there are detrimental effects on health. So many people spend whole days in front of computers or smartphones, which causes eyes to be harmed and the brain to be tired two times more. Although the internet is beneficial when you are working, the sitting poses in front of a laptop can be hazardous for your spine. People become wilted more than before due to stress because computers make us less conscious. Therefore, some individuals prefer to be in some libraries. Silence, recuperation with a book and peer to peer study are found only in such places. Yet, students are more motivated to study by coping with others' study styles in libraries.
Overall, libraries are still of paramount importance for students and further people will be reluctant to spend less time with their cell-phones or computers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98120300752 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67114456462 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616541353383 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3459584346 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.84615384615 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132234130476 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457644095191 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0342655683509 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0775551495236 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018766917137 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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