Your English teacher has found a new penfriend for you.
Write a letter to the penfriend and introduce yourself. Tell them what you like doing in your free time. Ask your penfriend to tell you about their hobbies and interests.
Dear Miss Jane,
How are you and your family?. I am your new friend, Jennifer. Let me tell a little about myself as i’m excited to talk to you. I am dark in complexion, tall with brown eyes and hair. In grade 4 and a lover of poetry. i’m an ambivert and spend a lot of my free time playing cards with friends, attending social parties organized by some of the houses in school. I can also be creative with my time, presently l’m writing a journal on every poem I come across.
I would love to a few things about you like your hobbies. if you like parties, dancing or social gatherings. if you are an ambivert, an extrovert or an introvert. Does poems or literature interest you, as it is one of my best subject. if you prefer calculations that is maths. Which club do you belong to?
I look forward to your reply as I can wait to get to know you and tell you all the exciting things that has been happening both in school and outside.
Yours Sincerely,
Janet Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Miss Jane, How are you and your family?. I am your ...
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Suggestion: I&apos
...hair. In grade 4 and a lover of poetry. i'm an ambivert and spend a lot of my fre...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
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..., attending social parties organized by some of the houses in school. I can also be creativ...
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Suggestion: If
...few things about you like your hobbies. if you like parties, dancing or social gat...
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Suggestion: If
... parties, dancing or social gatherings. if you are an ambivert, an extrovert or an...
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Suggestion: If
...t you, as it is one of my best subject. if you prefer calculations that is maths. ...
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Message: “if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...t you, as it is one of my best subject. if you prefer calculations that is maths. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that is maths. Which club do you belong to? I look forward to your reply...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is maths. Which club do you belong to? I look forward to your reply as I can wa...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n happening both in school and outside. Yours Sincerely, Janet Jones
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...ool and outside. Yours Sincerely, Janet Jones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 818.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42162162162 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44611168619 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67027027027 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8337885435 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.5333333333 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3333333333 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322559001591 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110230504741 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730367612567 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215556514794 0.12726935374 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0361690918325 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.