People living in large cities today face many problems in this everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towm?
These days, cities dwellers often cope with the pressures of modern city life on a daily basis. In my point of view, people living in metropolis cities should be encouraged to move to suburban areas because of several reasons.
To begin with, there are various problems that people living in big cities have to face with. Firstly, unemployment rate is one of the main issues; overpopulation makes it hard for employees to get a job. As a result, this can run the risk of engaging in criminal activities as a way of making a living, for they fail to resist the temptation to have more money, which poses a serious threat to people living in these cities. Additionally, people also get into troubles with housing problem as the cost of living in urban areas is extremely high. Consequently, a number of people have difficulties paying for rent and utility bills, and many people even live in poor conditions in shed, garages and outhouses.
To solve these problems, in my opinion, government should take into account encouraging city inhabitants move to smaller regions. One of the main reasons is that citizens could have higher chance of being recruited. This is due to the small decrease in the intensity of competition between job seekers as there are fewer people applying for the same position.Secondly, people who relocate may have higher living standard for the reason that living expense can be lowered, which is affordable for them to pay. Also, rural life is more peaceful, which has tremendous benefits for people' s health and help them avoid stress-related illnesses.
In conclusion, unemployment and housing are serious issues in big cities, and in my opinion the relocation would be one of the most effective solution to tackle these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1483.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02711864407 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80777432633 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3807943092 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.583333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319220857243 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116291133842 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777224298895 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175275810704 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089725038481 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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