Caring for our children is very important part of our society. Therefore all mothers and fathers should take a childcare training course. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Children are considered to be the future of a society and in order for them to develop well, it is often thought that parents should have a training to nuture and help them grow better. Personally, I believe this could be a very effective strategy for producing new generation who can take responsibility for their community.
First of all, children are extremely innocent and vulnerable, which makes them need constant guidance from parents to find their feet in the world. however, there are many families which lack the right parenting skills and children have to suffer in want of proper advice. this could be possibly due to a change in the circumstances in the lives of parents in each succeeding generation and the challenges associated with this change. For example, the needs of children in the 20th century is different from those of the previous one and parents often fail to take this into account. It is therefore, imperative to have the knowledge that makes them well-equipped for what it takes them to be good parents.
Moreover, parents are increasingly faced with the problems of their children taking the wrong path and becoming involved in anti-social behavior. This is not a concern only for fathers and mothers, but also for the society. However, having an arrangement which allows parents in the community to learn the psychology of a child and other important facts about <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">child-</span>raising could help prevent such problems as they could be able to encourage their young ones for creative and productive behavior. Parents' club in Nepal is a typical example of such a community effort where parents who are considered good examples of successful parenting volunteer to offer counselling to new parents about effective child care.
In conclusion, parents have a key role in shaping the future of a child and the environment that he lives. One of the effective ways to ensure this is by instructing the parents about good parenting.
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Suggestion: However
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15902140673 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34209772787 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522935779817 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3738843968 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.769230769 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118007967328 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505653114173 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426782266886 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734429151924 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464344894686 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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