Some people are fond of buying new gadgets, phones, or laptops. Is this a good or bad thing? Discuss your opinion.
Technology has revolutionized the modern-era with the help of new appliances such as smartphones, laptops, and etc. It has been often seen that people love to keep themselves up to date with latest gadgets due to the amazing technology packed in it. To some extent, I believe that it is nice to keep up with the advancements. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and pitfalls of it.
Who does not love the latest technology? Twenty-first century is often referred as the technological century where the mankind has seen amazing gadgets of all time from smartphones to holographic communication. Spending on latest smartphones and gadgets can yield some good benefits. Firstly, people who are very into buying such things are regarded as one step ahead of other people as they know every bit of forthcoming evolution. Secondly, owning latest technology does not only give extra perks of it but also provides you the youth feeling. Finally, for some people it is their bread and butter to spend money and post videos on social networking sites. For example, people post reviews on YouTube to earn handsome money based on people’s clicks.
However, it can be also seen as the waste of money and people end up spending more money on technology than necessities. Not everyone is born with a good spoon in their mouth to afford such luxuries. While expenditure on such new amazing items can also be quite harmful in a sense that a person’s credit keeps increasing and eventually, he ends up under the pile of big loans. For instance, most of the loan application received by the banks are to buy such wonderful goodies. Therefore, it is always suggested to evaluate your needs before proceeding with any purchase.
To conclude, it is good to a certain extent to spend on new laptops, cellphones and gadgets which helps you to keep up with the modern society. However, the basic necessities should always prevail over such luxuries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...ppliances such as smartphones, laptops, and etc. It has been often seen that people love...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[8]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has often been
...ch as smartphones, laptops, and etc. It has been often seen that people love to keep themselve...
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Line 1, column 187, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the latest'.
Suggestion: with the latest
...ople love to keep themselves up to date with latest gadgets due to the amazing technology p...
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Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'owning the latest'.
Suggestion: owning the latest
...bit of forthcoming evolution. Secondly, owning latest technology does not only give extra per...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested evaluating'.
Suggestion: suggested evaluating
...derful goodies. Therefore, it is always suggested to evaluate your needs before proceeding with any p...
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Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...p with the modern society. However, the basic necessities should always prevail over such luxurie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95731707317 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81651219206 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6543750441 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172058428476 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513273040267 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388274385352 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100333944503 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0214809236828 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.