You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some time off work to
complete it.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Ask for some time off to complete a qualification.
Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off.
Say how the qualification helps your job or company.
Dear manager,
I am writing this requesting for some time off work to complete my PMP (Project Management
Professional) certification for which I will be taking up the exam on 25 th of September.
Since I am working for 10 hours per day and 6 days a week, I am finding it difficult to spare time for my
preparation for the exam. The weekdays are hectic, but the weekends have lesser load of work, so I
thought that I would take the weekend that is Saturday an off which I usually work.
After completion of exam I would rather double fold my work contribution and I am also ready to work at
the weekends and stretch my work hours so that I can cope with the lag which I had during my off time.
The PMP certification will be helpful in my career since it is a globally accepted. The company will also
gain credits in the eyes of the association for having a certified professional in the team.
Regards,
shafaquat
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-08-31 | Ammu helen | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Preparation
...ing it difficult to spare time for my preparation for the exam. The weekdays are hectic, ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thought
...ekends have lesser load of work, so I thought that I would take the weekend that is S...
^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...bution and I am also ready to work at the weekends and stretch my work hours so t...
^^^
Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Gain
...bally accepted. The company will also gain credits in the eyes of the association ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 769.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49707602339 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72543481643 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590643274854 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.6344012277 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.166666667 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 16.8248392259 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188384509389 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806795634964 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700681278862 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855634670669 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662445748655 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.44 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.