Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I believe that the most important aspect to be successful in a business is to have the ability to make outstanding relationships with people and customers. In my perspective, nonetheless, being an expert and having good educational background is of paramount importance, but without expanding good relationships and links with people, no business would succeed. In the following I will briefly summarize a few reason which leads me to take this side.
First, appropriate behavior with customers is very important because this behavior would cause them to be your permanent customers and refer to you the other times and not to go your opponent companies. This will bring your company a great prestige.
Furthermore, becoming a prestigious company by behaving well with your customers may lead to your customers to become your free advertisers. The customers who were satisfied with your services and behavior would narrate this everywhere with their friends which would expand your customer's population and profits you.
Besides your customers, suitable relation with other companies and industries would bring you the opportunity to corporate with them in various fields and expand your services which in turn will increase your benefits and incomes.
These were a few reasons which shapes my mind to give the priority to the relationships. Not underestimating the importance of the education and expertise which is the most important factor to provide customers with acceptable services, but no business will make profit unless it provides good relations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'few reasons'.
Suggestion: few reasons
...he following I will briefly summarize a few reason which leads me to take this side. Fir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, briefly, but, first, furthermore, may, nonetheless, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 243.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45679012346 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98147509137 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5099991598 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.6 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.6045352989 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176610771864 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773244893302 0.076458572812 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401526577428 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104789643057 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228787414112 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 10.9000537634 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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