Some people argue that young people should concentrate on study or work. Some people think it is better to put energy in activities designed to broaden their experience, such as international travel and volunteering. Support with examples or cases.
In this competitive era, it is witnessed that young people should learn new upcoming technology and apply them in real life in work to broaden their experience. Young people should complete their study then they need to concentrate on their work to get an experience. As experience makes people confident and they can do further better job on their chosen career and they can get success fast. Many argues that young people should concentrate study or work any one task at a time for better performance and some think that young people need to put their energy in activities to broaden their experience. In this article, I will depict my view in next paragraph.
To begin with study or work. Traditional people thinks that study or work plays significant role in their success. For example, nowadays, companies recruits employee who have study with experience in their area. Companies are looking for globalized knowledgeable person who has feel of what is happening around the world. Secondly employee is capable of volunteering. Furthermore, young people should focus on study or work on primary basis and side by side they need to focus on those activities which widen their experience.
On the contrary part, if young people put their energy in activities designed to broaden their experience such as travels, volunteering etc. They will become more confident and they will succeed very fast. There is enormous benefits in putting energy in interested task rather than focusing on mundane work.
In conclusion, putting energy in activities outweigh study or work for young people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'felt'.
Suggestion: felt
...globalized knowledgeable person who has feel of what is happening around the world....
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Line 5, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...zed knowledgeable person who has feel of what is happening around the world. Seco...
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Line 9, column 207, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are enormous benefits'?
Suggestion: There are enormous benefits
...fident and they will succeed very fast. There is enormous benefits in putting energy in interested task ra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 259.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17760617761 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67042501857 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528957528958 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7259623288 50.4703680194 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.9669160288 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.498504813221 0.242375264174 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16834963964 0.0925447433944 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146413304434 0.071462118173 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29058062858 0.151781067708 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101028983923 0.0609392437508 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 12.6369458128 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.32886699507 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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