"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In many countries the major proportion of government funding on health is allocated to treatment and cure rather than preventing the ailment and disease at the first place. this trend has to be certainly reversed to take advantage of the government's expenditure on public health.
First and foremost, the patient flow in the hospitals seem to be ever increasing although in the recent times presence of health facilities and services have increased manifold. this clearly means that in spite of the increasing investment in building hospitals and developing advanced medical technologies, governments have been finding it increasingly difficult to maintain a healthy society. While, such facilities have been providing temporary relief and solace to the public, they are definitely not a long-term solution.
However, providing health education to raise public awareness and inclucate healthy eating habits and lifestyles have been shown to be very effective in preventing people from running into health related problems. In other words, when people know for certain that when they avoid certain food or cultivate healthy eating habits, they are more likely to stay inspired to be healthy. Moreover, when people can complement their wholesome food behavior with regular exercise and fitness regimes, they will no longer need to avail medical services frequently. In public Republic of China and Japan, for example, governments' focus is mainly on public awareness programs and health education which is an excellent example of countries with people who live long without much medical assistance.
To sum up, countries should earmark more budget for public health and health education and not for therapies and treatments. when people understand the benefits of healthy food intake and physical exercise, they will naturally be encouraged to lead a healthier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for example, in other words, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59090909091 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75292978961 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.5040515202 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.363636364 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189164200651 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783137125431 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071300779667 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129874479845 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664044551856 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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