Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The growth of large supermarkets has made lives much more convenient than before as there are now more affordable products available to the society. However, it leaves some small businesses paralysed because they could not compete. While this is somewhat gainful, some believe that small businesses going bankrupt that require trading to cease will destroy local communities in which I completely agree with.
The first issue that communities are likely to face is the economic collapse. The operations of stores in regions are essential as these provide disposable incomes to local business owners. Closing these crucial businesses would impede the circular flow of income, especially for the family businesses that mainly derive their revenues from selling consumer goods. For instance, there were several stores in one village that catered to the needs of the local and those living nearby; however, the shops were hard struck by the supermarket that was recently opened. This supermarket usually sells much cheaper and has a variety of products, which is beneficial to low-income families. As a result, local small shops were forcibly closed down as they could not counterattack the price competition.
The second reason is a potential increase in unemployment rates in the regional areas. Not only local businesses proffer incomes to the owners, but also work to the residents. Many low-paid workers who work as a check-out operator are often not required to have higher education. Searching for an office job would mostly be impossible because they might not meet the qualification criteria. And this requirement is either a bachelor’s or master’s degree in the related field, depending on the position applied. Therefore, closing down the local business operations will certainly affect their work opportunity, in particular the one that struggles to meet one’s daily ends. As a result, these store workers would probably end up being unemployed.
In summary, despite various conveniences and monetary benefits those large supermarkets bring to the society at large, the adverse effects on the small-scale business communities as well as unskilled people are more severe.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, in particular, in summary, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54277286136 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84314062788 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607669616519 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2265322987 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.529411765 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9411764706 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221496001759 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665935242087 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068204752205 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13305774676 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395617729566 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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