You recently went to the cinema and think that you left something that belongs to you there. Write a letter to the cinema manager. In your letter
say when you were at the cinema and which film you saw
describe what item you have lost and where you think you left it
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to let you know that I have lost one of my important items in your theatre yesterday. I went to the cinema to watch the movie "Hello Brother" at 5 o'clock in the evening. I arrived before the showtime. The show started at the right time and it finished ten-minutes late. Also, I had popcorn and cold-drink during intermission. Overall, I spent quality time there with my family.
Actually, I am a little worried about my belonging. I have lost my mobile phone, which was gifted by my wife on my birthday. I clearly remember that the mobile phone was in my back pocket when I left my seat after the show has finished. After leaving the theatre hall, I went to the restroom near the hall number one. I believe that I left it somewhere in the toilet. However, I am still not completely sure about where exactly I lost my cellphone.
In order to find my handheld device, I would like to request you to please help me to track it somewhere in the suspected areas, such as the male restroom, at the reception, and in the cafe. Furthermore, I would like you to see CCTV recordings for that specific time so that we can try to find out my mobile phone. Do you have a department for lost and found things?
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Matt Henry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: o'clock
...he movie 'Hello Brother' at 5 oclock in the evening. I arrived before the sh...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...other' at 5 oclock in the evening. I arrived before the showtime. The show s...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, however, if, look, so, still, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53441295547 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61357905111 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4222110826 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8823529412 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22705109003 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669038869333 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774785687541 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153547299548 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657987219691 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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