These days, an increasing number of people in many cities know little about their neighbors and do not have a sense of community. What do you think are the causes and what solutions can you suggest?
In this day and age, it is true that more and more people living in urban areas do not get close to their neighbors, so there is a lack of community sense. There are several reasons for this trend and this essay will offer some feasible measures.
To begin with, there are two main reasons why city dwellers hesitate tobe close with the people living nearby them. The first reason is that life is getting more hectic than ever, so people are constantly up to the ears with job, study and taking care of their own family. In fact, they even do not have time to relax, not to mention spending time to caring about other people. Another reason should be the complexity of society in cities in terms of culture, religions, social position; which makes people feel unsafe when interacting with others. For example, people maybe afraid of being cheated or their assets being stolen if they share their private life with someone. As a result, people keep a distance with anyone especially who lives near them.
However, there are some radical solutions to tackle this problem. Firstly, the local authorities should organize many social events to encourage people to communicate and work together. For instance, there should be camping in the area, party on holidays or cleaning the streets, planting trees. Since these activities bring people together, they will get to know more about each other and feel a sense of community. Secondly, the police should show their strict observation and well management over the areas so that residents feel safer outside their own house. If people feel that they are safe and all criminals are supervised, they will be open more and be willing to socialize with their neighbors.
In conclusion, citizens have become less communicative with their neighbors because of their busy life and unsafety, however, the local authorities and police can take actions to improve the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99378881988 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36390897901 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580745341615 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7399225995 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.2 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0666666667 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155371718474 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534937922179 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377611470551 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932346316258 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195386099176 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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