Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Having good friends is one of the most important assets in life. Some people believe that it is better that we have a small number of people over a long period as our friends. Others, on the contrary, hold the position that making many new friends readily is more important. I, personally, am inclined to the latter idea. In the following paragraphs, I explain my reasons to clarify my viewpoint.
The first reason coming to my mind is that we are not going to be near our friends all the time. Maybe some circumstances occur that people force to be far away from their friends. In this case, if someone does not have the talent to make new friends, he will be alone and this loneliness might cause depression for him. For example, I had a friend in high school and we were very intimate. Always we were with each other and had a lot of fun together. His father was in the army and because of his work they went to another city. He could not interact with new people and was very shy. Some weeks later, when I talked to him, he was so depressed and sad and declared that he is so alone because he could not communicate with new people easily.
Another reason which deserves some word here is that by having the ability to being friend with new people, we can meet a lot of new adventures and experiences. Every people have some specific traits and characteristics which make them unique from others. If people have a limited circle of friends, he will meet with a few mindsets and ideas. Conversely, new ideas will lead people to experience new situations and increase the joy in life. For example, I had three roommates in the dorm and we always did some repetitive activities for our entertainment. Every weekend went to the cinema and came back to the dorm and none of us could make a new friend or bring another person into the group; the group was so boring for me. Nevertheless, the next semester, we had a new roommate who had a lot of innovative ideas. Consequently, we had much fun together and it was just for having met new people and getting friend with him.
To sum up, based on the aforementioned paragraphs, one of the most helpful traits of people is that who can make new friends easily. In this way, one can not be afraid of losing his old friend and will be happier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
... believe that it is better that we have a small number of people over a long period as our friend...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 392, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[1]
Message: The adverb 'Always' is usually not used at the beginning of a sentence.
... high school and we were very intimate. Always we were with each other and had a lot o...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: EACH_EVERY_NNS[1]
Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
... lot of new adventures and experiences. Every people have some specific traits and ch...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, conversely, first, if, may, nevertheless, so, for example, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 422.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43838862559 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48506353159 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485781990521 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2516327043 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4347826087 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.347826087 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30434782609 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261194127909 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759422548934 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487730288344 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161757181337 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517015397937 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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