You want to apply for following job. Write a letter to Mr Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience would be necessary.
Dear Mr Moore,
my name is pooja arora and I am writing to you about the job opening for a waitress in the evening shifts. I am a suitable fit for the opportunity and both me and your company will benefit from it.
I have a total 4 years of experience, serving in different restaurants and bars. I have been in variety of roles ranging from being an individual server to supervising a few people. In addition, I am capable of handling billing and account systems. I can manage the morning as well as evening work timings including the weekends. I am quick in adapting to various cultures and feel no hesitation in interacting with the customers. my previous boss used to applaud me for handling the families with children very well.
If considered for the position, I will be fully committed to the company and to the happiness and satisfaction of our customers. I assure you there will be no complaints because of me.
Thank you for your consideration.
Your faithfully,
pooja arora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ving in different restaurants and bars. I have been in variety of roles ranging f...
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Line 9, column 433, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...tion in interacting with the customers. my previous boss used to applaud me for ha...
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Line 13, column 34, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... If considered for the position, I will be fully committed to the company a...
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Line 25, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Your faithfully, pooja arora
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88746636623 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609195402299 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8119103715 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.0833333333 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260008116473 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880891144392 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824238644513 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181243141446 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709963903693 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.14 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.