In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
One argues that allowing citizens to earn big wage may benefit the nation. In the contrast, other reckons that it is necessary for the government to regulate the payment earned by individuals as well as to limit it. This essay will discuss both arguments and later come with writer suggestion.
To begin with, the group who denotes that it important to allow the citizen to earn bigger payment argues: considerable fee will help the country to increase the state welfare. Having a number of societies with huge wages means that country will receive more taxes, in which will boost the economical development in the city. Moreover, it will also reduce the number of crimes caused by poverty. For example, robbery, thieves, illegal industries, corruption, etc.
On the other hand, the opposition argues that government should apply formal regulation for wage issues. The idea of this is to create economical balance among citizens. Since being unaware to the workers wage will create inequality that often lead to social discrimination such as employee exploitation, slavery and even industrial revolutions.
Based on these ideas, I think that government should standardize the minimum wage wisely. To ensure, whether or not the workers earned what they deserve. Since in many cases, some workers, especially those with high risk and physical demanding job, frequently receive lower compensation in compare to those who work in the office.
In conclusion, it is true that big salary will assist the progress of the country. However, it has detrimental, as it will create economical imbalance as well as social discrimination. Therefore, it should be a government responsibility to make sure it want not appear by regulating wage canon wisely.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...ive more taxes, in which will boost the economical development in the city. Moreover, it w...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ize the minimum wage wisely. To ensure, whether or not the workers earned what they deserve. ...
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Line 9, column 254, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wants'?
Suggestion: wants
...vernment responsibility to make sure it want not appear by regulating wage canon wis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in many cases, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27956989247 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83271605771 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609318996416 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9297702626 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166736731332 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536414186135 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368932673567 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925458458865 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369615318166 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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