Cheating and lying are sometimes acceptable. Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement and discuss why you chose that position. Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size:11.5pt;line-height:115%;font-family:
"Segoe UI","sans-serif";color:black;background:lightgrey">Cheating and lying
are sometime acceptable, it is acceptable when either of them are being used
for a major good cause. Let's delve into the essay below and understand the
usage in a prominent way. </span><span style="font-size:11.5pt;
line-height:115%;font-family:"Segoe UI","sans-serif";color:black"><br>
<span style="background:lightgrey">As said cheating and lying are way of action, similarly as
manipulation and caring. Let explain it taking example from India and Pakistan
war in 1967. Where Indian Major took the advantage of lying to Pakistani
General and convincing him that Indian troops will outnumber Pakistani army and
it will be a lose for Pakistani army at the cost of their soldiers. Pakistani
General agreed to this and the WAR was halted with minimal casualties. It was a
Win-Win situation for both the countries. Here it helped and was use for good
cause. </span><br>
<span style="background:lightgrey">Many neurologist accept the fact that when patients are
convince that the new medicine is better than the previous one, we observe
better results and faster recovery, it is a state of mind that get strength to
fight with the help of a lie. Will we call this a cheating or lie? not at all.
In this budding population we have mere hope for a pragmatic approach every time,
therefore a small lie to give a false believes and hopes is valuable. </span><br>
<span style="background:lightgrey">Lying is an art, one need to be confident with fake fact and
figures so that other person is bound to believe in you. Cheating is not wrong
until that is caught, but cheating in examination, with spouse or lying to
parents and families are not good at all. I would like to advocate that it is
acceptable to lie and cheat when the repercussion is helping and motivating but
not to harm anyone.</span></span><o:p></o:p></p>
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...y time, therefore a small lie to give a false believes and hopes is valuable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, similarly, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 10.5418719212 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1207.87684729 155% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 6.36054421769 5.00649968141 127% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.45623654517 2.71678728327 311% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578231292517 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 126.454097952 50.4703680194 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.833333333 104.977214359 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.9669160288 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 7.25397266985 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.12807881773 630% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.33497536946 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113042787286 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550203683859 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04572621146 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.036421121468 0.151781067708 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047387996667 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 12.6369458128 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.9 11.5310837438 173% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.94827586207 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.