Modern technology now allows rapid and uncontrolled access and exchange of information . Far from being beneficial this is a danger to our society ,what is your view?
From the dawn of invention of contemporary technology people's life become high-tech and materialistic . This modern change provide the facility of exchange knowledge and data with others without worrying about geographical boundaries. Both the negative and positive points relating to modern technology would be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with my own perspective .
The first and foremost benefit of latest technical gadgets is communication spread over the countries. People from any where , any time contact to their relatives via using mobile phones. To illustrate , my elder brother studies into Canada he frequently does not come to India but during weekends he contact with us through laptop. Secondly , masses get their comfort zone facilities like they can purchase all required things over internet and also they do not need to visit bank physically for daily transaction . Online shopping centers like Amazon , MacDonald and e-banking are
available which allows to customers shop and do your work with merely press only one key on laptop.
On the flip side , exclusive techniques of doing office work with use of gadgets make people lazy and inactive . Those employees working from home are loss their self confidence of public speaking. Apart from that users of contemporary technical things are face a huge financial loss and they become victim of cyber crime. To exemplify , previous month my colleague got a message that you won a KBC contest and we send winner prize amount to you , kindly provide your account number . When she send her account number within minutes account balance come to zero. Because her account hacked by cyber crime hackers.
To recapitulate , cosmopolitan generation have addiction of using gadgets but merely it's wise use beneficial for us otherwise we our suffer a huge psychology and financial loss.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38487972509 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73487245673 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687285223368 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.558815104 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.466666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10633643965 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318663737344 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0329162053418 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614233238639 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478936725127 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.