Education is the fundamental right and basic need for the development of the society all across the world. The education policies have been changing over the course of time and with changes in the governance. But it is not difficult to find consensus that education of the students is seminary for the growth of the nation and prosperity of the region. This is explained in details to follow-
For first, The author has advocated that the government should offer free education to the students unable to afford their tuition fees. One would certainly agree on this proposal. But this proposal needs further deep analysis before implementing it. In my opinion, the government should first define the criteria for students, those are to be considered for financial aid. Another point of consideration would be the expenditure of the university that incurs in the form of salary to the employees, development & funding of the research and other expenses to ensure quality education. In case the policy is implemented and the funding of the university is not increased then quality of education is going to suffer anyways.
In addition to that there have been suggestions for increasing the share of GDP, for any country, in order to promote free education to those who are in need. This aid to scintillating students will give them a fair chance to prove their prudence. Research have shown that those countries investing more in education have more chances of growth in terms of economy. This objective this growth is achieved by the innovations in the field of science, arts and other, and this in turn leads to the overall development and economic growth. Many European countries, for example, have already subsidized higher education and some have even made university education absolutely free.
So, all in all, free education to those in need will promote both the students and serve the objective of the county as well.
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- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain y 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Education is the fundamental right and b...
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Suggestion:
...ve the objective of the county as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, if, so, then, well, for example, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 12.9106741573 170% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 319.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05642633229 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73347127923 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529780564263 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8066448732 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.533333333 118.986275619 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 5.21951772744 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252991781445 0.243740707755 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754329628821 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704862623019 0.0758088955206 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136557262357 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498037446552 0.0667264976115 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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