You celebrated your birthday with some friends last week in a restaurant. It was a great success and you and your friends enjoyed the evening very much.
Write a letter to the restaurant to thank them. Mention the food, service and the atmosphere. Also, suggest any improvements to make things better.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am jasmine and had organised a birthday party a couple of weeks ago at your prestigious Hotel Civic. The reasons for my writing is to express my gratitude for the cordial and great coöperation given the hotel staff and management team to make my grand party a huge success.
At first, the interior decoration of the venue was exquisite. Besides, my friends were astonished with the marvelous cake of unique design. Moreover, the soft drinks at welcoming was offered perfectly. The sitting arrangement was a top-notch. Afterwards, the dinner was of tidbit and delicious as well as mouth-watering deserts has made end of the party fully fantastic.
The colorful and soothing area with a soft music make the party to shine. Furthermore, the catering service should be given five-star reviews.
Additionally, my friend were delightful and enthusiastic with the overall arrangements of the party. Most probably they have enjoyed the music chair game and balloon dance. I would suggest the hotel management team to also give the ample space. As overall hospitality and decoration was great with exception to a cozy space.
Yours faithfully,
Jasmeen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 231, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[1]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
... perfectly. The sitting arrangement was a top-notch. Afterwards, the dinner was of tidbit a...
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Line 11, column 31, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tastic. The colorful and soothing area with a soft music make the party to shin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, furthermore, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28421052632 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90252063538 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626315789474 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7009425448 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7142857143 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5714285714 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159583792897 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052224608933 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304398809276 0.0603063233224 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794725687242 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257770352846 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.