Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.
Most criminals do not know the consequences of committing a crime. Going to Prison can ruin a man's life. They often realize it only after putting behind bars.I agree with the opinion that people lived in jail could give a clear picture to students about the dangers of doing felonies.
Crime is always enticing,especially to teens.According to numbers released by FBI,in the USA,the average number of crimes committed by people between age group of 14-20 has been rising over years. In many countries school shootings are being reported.There are several factors for this increase. One reason is Cinemas glorifying crime. Lack of empathy in childhood can also be another reason.
But being in jail is very tough. It can impact a person both physically and psychologically. The hard labor and torture make criminals regret their decision to execute crime. Life in a cell can cause mental illnesses and destabilize people. Relationships with loved ones may be broken. There is also a chance of getting addicted to drugs. Finding a good job is very difficult after coming out of Prison.However, these truths are not depicted to people. If former inmates are asked to describe their life before and after prison, young children can draw insights and understand the affects of committing crime.
In conclusion, it is very good to have prisoners talking to young children about the hardships after committing crime. Government should include this in the communal service and the rates of crime can decrease rapidly by this. After all, today's children are tomorrow's citizens.
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- Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, others think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 73
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- Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.Discuss both these views and give y 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23529411765 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87034714513 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3947566285 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212452108613 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521217769338 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671802644568 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127076997998 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335267573741 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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