a few individuals trust its governments responsibility to guarantee that is notional have a healthy diet.
The importance of a few individuals trust its governments responsibility to guarantee that is notional have a healthy diet. while others trust that it is the people duty.which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion.the substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years.in my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. this essay will further elaborate both positive and negative effects of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of reasons will further explain this argument but the most the preponderant one stems from the fact that the many people understand another pivotal aspect that trend is that..needless to say all these ,tries stand in a good stead.
However there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of this trend but one of the most alarming one is that.. besides.. hence, it is apparent why many are against this trend.
according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of a few individuals trust that its governments responsibility to guarantee that its notional have a healthy diet, while others trust that it is the people duty. are instrumental indeed. nevertheless, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, hence, however, look, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 20.9802955665 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1242.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35344827586 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96702046905 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 139.433497537 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547413793103 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 381.6 379.143842365 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.620773142 50.4703680194 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 138.0 104.977214359 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 20.9669160288 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.25397266985 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.33497536946 262% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323819019138 0.242375264174 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180096624066 0.0925447433944 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.319885172656 0.071462118173 448% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20249794905 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.218677388484 0.0609392437508 359% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 12.6369458128 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.1260098522 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.9458128079 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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