Do you think that students today are more interested in politics than in the past?
With the rapid changes of the current generation, people nowadays their lifestyle is different from the past one. Especially for the student’s involvement of politics, it is quite ironic that students in the past indeed feel more indifferent to politics, however, nowadays students spend much more time on politics than before, below are some reasons why I think so.
Firstly, due to the rise of the Internet and the social media, there has been lots of cyber celebrities, youtuber and netizen comes out, making good use of their popularity and use those network platform to make many different kinds of video contents from politics to entertainment and so on, moreover the products of those new media let students get to know more about politics in more various and attractive ways than the traditional media can do.
Secondly, the changes in social and educational atmosphere indeed had potential influence on student’s thinking toward politics. Nowadays many educators try to focus more on political aspect, and start to teach students to voice their opinions and share their perspectives on some political issues what’s more, the more schools and society teach students, the more political knowledge students understand.
Finally, the globalization. It is clear that in modern society countries from all over the world has started to have close relationships with other countries, such as the trade, politics, or entertainment aspects in order to reinforce the strong bonds between countries. Because of this reason we can easily get access to foreigners and increase the global cooperation, therefore students may be intrigued by the globalization of their own countries then have the desire to know more about the politics.
In short, with the rapid development of our nearby environment I think students are somehow influenced by the atmosphere, and feel more interested in politics than in the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... and use those network platform to make many different kinds of video contents from politics t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, i think, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36184210526 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9263506216 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.439928085 48.9658058833 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 181.111111111 100.406767564 180% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.7777777778 20.6045352989 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 5.45110844103 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362995688417 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140553521489 0.076458572812 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125593646906 0.0737576698707 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217971056991 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109414295585 0.0645574589148 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 11.7677419355 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 58.1214874552 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.1575268817 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.4 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 10.002688172 195% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.247311828 205% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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