The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.

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The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.

Nowadays people are more accessible to other places with the development of the transportation and there are multiple ways people can choose when travelling such as travelling in a group led by a tour guide or travelling by themselves. As far as I am concerned, travelling with other tourists and a tour guide provides best travelling experiences.

A tour guide will introduce the background knowledge about the places people are visiting and the knowledge will leave great impression on the tourists' mind. When people go to the historical relics, it's not enough for them to just see the buildings or some objects. The introduction from the tour guide will help them understand deeply and clearly. I once went to the Forbidden City with my parents at the age of seven, I was too young to understand the numerous palaces and I didn't even know which palace belongs to the emperor. Nobody told me at that time so that the only impression I have towards the Forbidden City now is that there are many palaces. If a tour guide had introduced some information to me, the situation would be much better.

Travelling in a group gives people opportunities to make new acquaintances. Usually the tourists in a group come from different places all over the country or even the world. People can talk about their own cultures, language and unique customs. If people choose to travel by themselves, it's impossible for them to experience new cultures.

Traveling with a group of people can ganrantee the safety to some extent. Every time people leave the visiting place, the tour guide will count the number of the tourists and it will quickly be discovered if one of the tourists is missing. And the rescue activity will be conducted soon if the tourist is in danger. When I graduated from high school, I signed up for a travelling group since my parents worried about me if I travelled alone. The result was that I came back safely with that whole group.

From the above reasons, we can find that travelling in a group will achieve the aim of appreciating the sceneries, making friends with other tourists and mostly importantly, ganrantee a relatively safer trip for the tourists.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, as to, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87667560322 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75871183402 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504021447721 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2789815677 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.055555556 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7222222222 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.22222222222 5.45110844103 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259758032032 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839229066621 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885811322421 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161162752373 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12006855396 0.0645574589148 186% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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