The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
The environment has been damaged heavily due to the increase in the production of consumer goods. the causes depend on various factors and in this essay i will show you the way to solve this serious problem.
First, I’d like to mention immediately is the waste of chemical inside the products. The consumers always care about the quality, the cost and many things that are commercialized. Unfortunately, they give a zero-care about what left of the products after they used it. After all, the amount of chemical waste continues to increase every single day without any preventive solutions will harm the environment slowly but deathly. The second is that the resources to make the products, it’s continuing to become less because it isn’t eternal materials. Recording to the top news at the present, the Brazilian government has chopped down hundred of trees, destroyed ecosystem of the Amazon jungle just to rebuild a new city. That led to the cause of flood harmfully impact the environment.
As you see all the negative effects to the environment so the solutions must be strong and organizational. We need to spread the world all the messages, update the condition of the environment rapidly as soon as we could. We can use all kinds of social media to propaganda people, let they know what happening to the environment and finally put a plan to solve it.
In conclusion, there are many reasons impact the environment and all of them are urgely need to be solved by using reasonable and organizational solutions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, second, so, after all, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01953125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8877493086 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6708041116 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210092425087 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655057051995 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069764877119 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130175005697 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103838905006 0.056905535591 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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