Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the quantity of the female and male who study in each discipline in universities should be equal. In my opinion, I totally disagree with this for some reasons.
Learners have a right to choose the subjects in which they are interested regardless of the gender equality. In this term, it will be unfair if they cannot seek their favorite class because of the equal proportion of each gender. The most important thing is that students at universities could gain admission to courses based on their passion. Studying the favorite subjects related to the certain field they want to pursue is immensely important which helps them to be able to have a good grasp of academic knowledge for their future career. For example, it would be wrong if a girl with the ability to become a well-qualified nurse were rejected in favor of a boy in a nursing class due to equal proportion of gender.
Apart from some concerns expressed above, it is truly difficult to operate a class with the same numbers of male and female students in several certain subjects. For instance, because of the gender divergent personality, it can be seen that girls considered the weak gender tend to be more passionate in fields of fashion and accountancy in comparison with boys who always love to study some fields such as technology and science. Therefore, universities should fill a course which depends on the quantity of applications instead of gender percentage. In this way, the departments of universities could operate smoothly their curricula with courses without taking account into whether the same proportion of gender.
In conclusion, it would be more appropriate when students of universities could apply for admission to classes they love to study without any restriction associated with equal percentage of gender.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05980066445 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82130032853 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521594684385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8220282332 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.916666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0833333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145873691973 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659024484164 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581145014478 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111806603577 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050343585047 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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