Some companies sponsor sports as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think this is good while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Sponsorship of sports is becoming increasingly popular. Some people believe that it is beneficial for sports as it not only financially supports sports bodies but companies also get the opportunity to promote their goods to larger audience, whereas others argue that this development is disadvantageous as companies’ investment may go in vain. I agree with the former view.
On the one hand, this development brings financial support to the sports teams. With the help of those funds teams can be provided with better infrastructure and facilities. Therefore, players can train and improve themselves properly. For example, brands like ‘coca cola’ sponsor local cricket tournaments or teams in india and the money they bring in, is capitalized to provide playing kits for players and to maintain playgrounds. Furthermore, sponsored teams or players advertises company’s name or logo internationally while playing the sport. Consequently, this leads to an increase in the popularity and awareness of the brand. Hence, sponsorship is advantageous for both companies and sports.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks of this development. Sometimes because investing too much money in sports bodies, companies experience money loses. For instance, BMW, a Germen automobile company, sponsored national boat race team but that team did not even qualify for the Olympics and that resulted in loss of 20 million pounds in 2017. Therefore, it is undeniable that in sports performing good or bad, is part of the game. Due to that sometimes companies do face financial loses.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that the sponsorship of sports bring several benefits to sports bodies ranging from providing infrastructure and facilities, to promoting brands to large number of audience. In the future, sponsorships are expected to play a significant role in the development of sports and marketing techniques.
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1649.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57094594595 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19733842015 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597972972973 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.3289924635 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205229572205 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667347349749 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605777275798 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127800573543 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580575270309 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.73 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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