As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate

Essay topics:

As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate

Many people believe that technology advancement will make the life of people easier and will lead to deterioration in their to think themselves.

However, I beleive that advancement in technology will truly make the life easier but it will not lead to deterioration in the thinking ability. On the contrary, such advancement will create new challenges and problems that need solution. The people have to work out these problems and overcome the new challenges.

As an example, consider the new era of communications where with a single click you can reach the other side of the world. This exraordinary connection allows you to be informed with the updates in the whole world, the problems they are facing, the new ideas they have developped to solve these problems.

Another example is the use of the technology advancement in the medical treatment. Novel devices are now available that can be used to discover the disease in early stages. This allows the patients to be treated earlier. This medical advancement made the doctors busy finding new medicine for the new discovered diseases.

An additional example is your car and the pollution caused by it. Don't you think that the people have to find a solution to protect the environment from it? you can generalize this on every technological problem we face. You can not deny that the advancement in technology will lead to increase in the challenges and concequently an increas in the ability of people to think.

To sum up, the claim that the easier, life because of technology, means less thinking ability is not true. On the contrary, the technology advancement has created new challenges to think over and find solutions for.

Votes
Average: 5.3 (3 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2020-11-02 MARK_43 90 view
2020-10-20 devraj123 view
2020-10-20 devraj123 view
2013-12-25 Bhagirath93 63 view
2013-12-15 aschocolate 73 view
Essay Categories
Essays by user mohamedabdelhakim :

Comments

Sentence: Many people believe that technology advancement will make the life of people easier and will lead to deterioration in their to think themselves.
Description: The tag a determiner, possessive is not usually followed by to
Suggestion: Refer to their and to

Sentence: However, I beleive that advancement in technology will truly make the life easier but it will not lead to deterioration in the thinking ability.
Error: beleive Suggestion: believe

Sentence: This exraordinary connection allows you to be informed with the updates in the whole world, the problems they are facing, the new ideas they have developped to solve these problems.
Error: exraordinary Suggestion: extraordinary
Error: developped Suggestion: developed

Sentence: You can not deny that the advancement in technology will lead to increase in the challenges and concequently an increas in the ability of people to think.
Error: increas Suggestion: increase
Error: concequently Suggestion: consequently

flaws:
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1373 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200

And don't use three examples for essay body only. You need arguments. Read more top list essays.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 5 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 282 350
No. of Characters: 1373 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.098 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.869 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.798 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 76 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 34 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.421 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.267 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.35 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.636 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.139 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5