Nowadays online education has become popular as more institutes and companies are offering courses online. However,many people prefer traditional classroom training or study. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both methods.
Thank to the invention of computer and internet, teaching online has recently class="been">been offered by many institues and companies more and more. Although online courses class="bring">bring a lot of benefits for individual and the society, class="there">there are a number of people class="would">would rather class="take">take the traddition, class room training because of its advantages. This essay will discuss plus points and minus points of both methods.
On one hand, not only providing a flexible learning methodology, studying online also help learners to save much of their time. By taking online course, student/learner can choose what and when to study instead of depending on a fix schedule. Futhermore, studying online help us alot to save time for traveling from home to the institues/schools, and therefore, it contribute to help to reduce traffic jam of the city. Especially for busy people who have to work and study at the same time, studying online can be considered as a great solution for their work-life-study balance. With all of those benefits, online education has class="been">been chosen by more people eventually. Nevertheless, studying only class="would">would be quite boring because class="there">there is not one for you to interact with and you might lose interests and give up on easily.
Conversely, going to the classroom to class="take">take traditional training/ course will offer students with a tremendous experiment, a great learning environment that study at home could never class="bring">bring. traditional education creates the interaction among leaners, teachers/trainer and classmates which enable student to not only learn from the trainer, but also learn from other people in the classroom. class="take">take english for example, it's not bad to study online but it will be more fun and easier to class="take">take the classroom training so that you could get in touch with teachers where you could practice your english reflexes. Even so, in the modern busy life, not everyone could manage their time to really go to a class room training as it is really time consuming
In conclusion, learning online or offline have its own advantages and disadvantages and individual should consider his/her target, time to choose what is best for him or her
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, nevertheless, really, so, therefore, even so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2106.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.96600566572 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.48388075927 2.80592935109 195% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555240793201 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.3483519071 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.0 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1538461538 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123769848169 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599710150937 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391577469048 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836843415239 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0202137177869 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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