People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position
“Wisdom, Compassion and courage are the three universally recognized moral qualities of men”- Confucius
The world that we witness today didn’t build in just one day rather there are lots of contributions of some fearless courageous people who believe to change the world one day.There are lots of contribution of people, around the world for which they work relentlessly day after day without thinking about its consequences. As it is stated above,people should be involved in risky action evaluating about its consequences first .In my opinion ,I disagree that people should evaluate before being in a risky actions, for three reasons.
Firstly ,In our world everything is unpredictable.We really don’t know what will happen to us in the following days just because our morning was good.For example ,when 9/11 incident happened the people of Twin Tower never knew that they would face such hard times in the ahead time .They perhaps started their day saying good bye to his wife ,promising their children to buy chocolates when he will return home but all of these remain uncompleted because of the mishap which was unpredictable.So we really cant think of its consequences ahead of our time as anything might happen in any time.For this reason a person should never be thinking about the risk behind an action rather if he wants it ,he or she should definitely pursue it .
Furthermore, courageous people are the one who has conquered the world .If we just see around our society there lies a lot of examples of it .Mark Zuckerberg ,the founder of facebook ,he didn’t think much when he dropped out his PH.D from a prestigious college.Rather,he took a risk to make his dream come true and the result is just in front our eyes .He is the youngest billionaire in the whole world .If that day he thought what would happen if he left college ,would he be successful or not ,will facebook become popular among the people, he would surely be never succeed . So ,courage without thinking about its after result, surely brings good results .
Moreover,if a person lives with a certain life and without risk ,does it will really make him happy?Happiness lies in listening to own heart rather sometimes logically .Suppose, A person want to go the Everest expedition but because of fear of death he spend an ordinary life . Whenever an expedition broadcast in TV, or he hear about someone”s expediton success he fell so remorseful with himself that what is he doing with his life? In this case,if he would become a little courageous that might be lead to something which will genuinely make him happy though there would be some risks .
So we all should lead our life the way it makes us happy.
However ,in some people’s opinion we should not do such work which is driven by impulse .For instance they will bring lots of sufferings , as people has taken that decision whimsically .Rather they should think about their family members before taking any drastic steps which will put them in a total uncertainty . Well,Life is full of opportunities and to get that we should become courageous and live our life fullest rather than become the frog in a well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 33.0505617978 218% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2669.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 536.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97947761194 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81161862636 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78565681173 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 282.0 215.323595506 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526119402985 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 804.6 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 48.0 23.0359550562 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.749770017 60.3974514979 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 242.636363636 118.986275619 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 48.7272727273 23.4991977007 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 5.21951772744 200% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 60.0 7.80617977528 769% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123698649441 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574614583508 0.0831039109588 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506742916258 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644700298726 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565215182673 0.0667264976115 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 14.1392134831 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.22 48.8420337079 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.8 12.1743820225 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.8971910112 256% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.2 11.2143820225 189% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 11.7820224719 178% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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